Why would you submit this? Do you realy think that someone fnds a lego guy twirling a sword interesting? This is a flash site, that movie had a very small amount to do with flash anything, and the fact that it was boring didn't help either. I have already watched you other clay movies, some were better than others, but most were boring. I hate to give you bad news because I realize the time it takes to make one of these movies, but do you realy want to waste time making legos and clay figures doing very pointless, unentertaining guestures?
Its one thing to use sprites in a flash movie and not know how to use them, but you know what your doing. The song is one of my personal favorites, and the way you made everything move in sync with the song was most impressive. I would love to see you make an action packed sprite movie. You have prooved yourself with this one, and the chances of you making one of the greatest sprite flash movie ever are looking good.
Can't you do better?
First of all, the story you thought up was very original, that was the best part about your movie, and basically the only reason I continued to watch it. The spites however, i don't see a problem in using them because I think it is a good place for new flash users to begin, but the ones you used were very out of proportion. Then you had little to no action in them. What I saw was constant motion tweening. The music would have been alright, but that laughing was getting extremly annoying. Try to make something that realy pushes your limits, its the only way to get better at makin flash. Keep those creative stories you think up, and you could make something worthwhile. I wish you good luck on your future entries, and hope my advice is useful.
Thanks for the compliment about the sprites and the story's - I like intelligent comments, even if you did give a three ;)
Of course, the laughing was meant to be so annoying it would make you... excruciatingly annoyed. But, not as much as to lower your review score.
Best review i've ever had. Its just the three I don't like... =(
Didnt cut it
First of all I agree with all of the other reviews giving it a zero, and by the looks of things, you are spending too much time replying, making fun of thier reviews, when you could be making something good instead. Im not trying to say give up, just work on something that your better at. Seriouly scrap the LOTR thing you got goin on and work on something cool. Like the maker of the madness series. Some of his previous work was just sad, like bread for exaple, this movie was prety bad, and I think you know it. So, go ahead, I know you will, reply and comment on my review making fun of it.
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